"Ulysses Simpson Grant." Biography Resource Center. Gale, 1998. Web. 28 Feb. 2010.

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Areas of Improvement

Please post any of your findings of things that I need to improve in my work.

4 comments:

  1. I do not think there are too many areas of improvement but perhaps you could use more color variation.

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  2. This blog was very good! The layout and the color where a little boring,though. Just white and black and the occasional red line. Maybe you could make it more intresting by adding more colors.

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  3. There wasn't that much you could do.... though you could have gone into a little more detail.

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  4. I think you could have been a little more colorful.

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